psamphire ([info]psamphire) wrote,
@ 2008-03-30 14:40:00
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Entry tags:dragons of mars, novel

Too many words!
It takes me forever to get my characters anywhere these days.

For example, it's just taken me almost 8,000 words to crash my airship. This would be okay if I was writing Fat FantasyTM, but this is supposed to be a kids' book. There was a time when 8,000 words would have been a substantial proportion of one of my books.

Now I've dropped my characters in the middle of the Martian wilderness, hundreds of miles from where they're supposed to be, and I have no idea how they're going to get where they're going. Nor how many words it's going to take to get them there.

One day, I expect to write a novel in which no one manages to get anywhere at all. ;)



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[info]meredith_wood
2008-03-30 03:13 pm UTC (link)
LOL. I'm just the opposite these days. *G* My favorite ways to get my characters somewhere starts with the following words: At the [whatever]...

I'm constantly having to go back in and add some meat to my stories.

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[info]psamphire
2008-03-30 07:43 pm UTC (link)
:) Sounds a great plan. Although my readers might wonder exactly *how* they got out of the Martian wilderness...

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[info]meredith_wood
2008-03-30 08:21 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, I keep running into that problem myself. :-) You just can't win for losing anymore.

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[info]tltrent
2008-03-30 04:45 pm UTC (link)
Ah, the joys of slogging through the middle...Shall I send a TARDIS to your characters' rescue? :)

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[info]psamphire
2008-03-30 07:43 pm UTC (link)
Very good idea! I might get sued, of course, but it would be good publicity...

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